来源:学而思教育 作者:刘晓伟老师 2009-10-14 18:33:42
今年的写作题考的是家务劳动,属于传统话题,目的是保证让大家有话可说。所以写作的重点不在于观点的新颖,而在于语言的优美。在中考点睛班中提供的十大闪光句型,可以说为无数学生获得写作高分起到了画龙点睛的作用。
中考点睛班讲义:
1. 第一段的写法:
It is generally believed that ______________________________________________________.
As is known to all, _____________________________________________________________.
If my memory serves me well, ____________________________________________________.
2. 第二段的写法:
There is no denying that _________________________________________________________. However, great importance should be attached to ___________________________________.
… have the following advantages. Above all / First of all, __________________________. Another advantage is that _______________________________________________________.
In addition/Furthermore/ Last but not the least, _____________________________________
第三段的写法:
Not only should we ____________________________, but also we should ______________________.
It is not until + 时间状语 + that we should ____________________________________.
It is ______________that we should pay more attention to so that we will advance together with a new spirit.
中考作文范例:
If my memory serves me well, housework is one of the most common things in our daily life. Everyone is supposed to take part in it and learn important lessons from it.
There is no denying that parents are responsible for most of the housework in the family. However, I , as a member of it, should do something within my ablility to reduce the burden of them. On almost every late afternoon, my father often mops the floor and cleans the bathroom while my mother cooks the dinner. It is not until after dinner that I join them to clean the table and wash the dishes. Knowing that they shoulder the responsibility of the whole family, I decide to do some more housework in summer holiday.
Not only should we enjoy the comfortable life, but also should we share the burden of those who create it for us. And such is human nature that we should care about our parents. (161words)
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