实例解析中考英语作文给分原则

       2008年中考英语作文题目：

　　Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”. (以“我身边的爱”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)(总分16分)

　　Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点)

　　Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.)

　　How do you feel when you get love from him/ her/ them?

　　What are you going to do to show your love?

　　-----------------------------以上为背景------------------------------------

　　下面我将为大家分享在这个题目下的几篇有特点的学生作文，附实际得分和我的点评。

　　说明：由于是前几年的作文了，这里面的作文在其他网上也能搜到。拿出来分享一个是会加上我的点评，这个是网上搜不到的，另一个也是希望孩子们更明确作文的写法和得高分的要素。

　　第一篇：

　　I live on a planet which is full of love. I can get love form my teachers, friends and my parents. When I get love from them, I feel warm and happy. They are the most important people in my life. I should show my love to them. I will help my parents to do some housework if they are tired. I will help my friends when they are in trouble. I should show my love to the person who gives me love.

　　【实际得分情况：5+6+1=12】
 

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